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    Dylan Patten @Slippery-Nipple

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    P(iss)oetry

    Posted by Slippery-Nipple - April 20th, 2009


    Happiness is all there is, in her
    Smiles ablaze
    Heart of fire

    A fire so bright it blinds
    But I don't need vision to see
    Beauty is not limited to sight
    I'll look on

    Maybe I'll wear this on my sleeve
    Ha, maybe

    I slap it on my sleeve
    Like a name tag
    "Hello, my name is : Great Intentions"

    Entering the battle field
    Instantly seared by embers
    Embracing the boils and scars

    Vanquishing my fears
    I confront her

    "Hello, my name is : Fraught With Disappointment"

    My sleeve smolders and I persevere.

    > I'll post more eventually.


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    hey, damn man your pretty good, lol i need to start writing again. was this writen to a real person, or was it simply self inspiration?

    Thank you :D

    This is written about someone, but not TO them. Essentially, just a confrontation with a girl that never physically happened.

    That is what it means to me, but it can mean or represent anything you would like, that is what poetry is, perspective and interpretation.

    :D Really Good Stuff. You did a nice poem, when I use to try and write poems I had to go into the thesaurus for ideas of what to write about, you seem to of wrote that right from the heart. I like it

    Thank you

    Yeah, I guess it was from the heart :D