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Dylan Patten @Slippery-Nipple

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P(iss)oetry

Posted by Slippery-Nipple - April 20th, 2009


Happiness is all there is, in her
Smiles ablaze
Heart of fire

A fire so bright it blinds
But I don't need vision to see
Beauty is not limited to sight
I'll look on

Maybe I'll wear this on my sleeve
Ha, maybe

I slap it on my sleeve
Like a name tag
"Hello, my name is : Great Intentions"

Entering the battle field
Instantly seared by embers
Embracing the boils and scars

Vanquishing my fears
I confront her

"Hello, my name is : Fraught With Disappointment"

My sleeve smolders and I persevere.

> I'll post more eventually.


Comments

hey, damn man your pretty good, lol i need to start writing again. was this writen to a real person, or was it simply self inspiration?

Thank you :D

This is written about someone, but not TO them. Essentially, just a confrontation with a girl that never physically happened.

That is what it means to me, but it can mean or represent anything you would like, that is what poetry is, perspective and interpretation.

:D Really Good Stuff. You did a nice poem, when I use to try and write poems I had to go into the thesaurus for ideas of what to write about, you seem to of wrote that right from the heart. I like it

Thank you

Yeah, I guess it was from the heart :D